Queen eternally

by carissalynn   Apr 29, 2007


The sun peaks from behind the mountain,
The cold defeats the warmth in the air.
The majestic Queen lays inhibited,
Never again to rise above and rule among nature.
The adolesence of the magnificent creature,
Is unhidden among the lines of its framework.
The casing of the creature is chilled and dense,
And the crown is frail and delicate.
Seasons have left blemishes and detterioration.
The virtuous Queen is gone in being,
But will always reign in spirit.

*What do you think i am talking about in this poem? Message me your thots!! ENJOY!*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    The title alone got me, everything else was just an added joy.

    your servant:
    david

  • 18 years ago

    by the pale queen of the silent night

    A great poem with great choice of vocb...
    thanks for ur comment.

  • 18 years ago

    by Rusheena

    Nice! I really like the allegory, but I figure out what you're talking about though

  • 18 years ago

    by ScaredToSeeMe

    I think you're a very gifted writer
    I wish I had only half of your talent
    I think everyone can find themself in your poems.
    You tell what you're thinkin' but at the same time you give advice to people
    at least that is what I think
    this really helped me
    thx

  • 18 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    Wow.
    I really liked this.
    It was really descriptive, and I like that.

    5/5

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