Thinking Your Eyes Would Not Lie (Collab)

by Italian Stallion   Apr 30, 2007


What I was thinking,
While the truth wasn't that
Knowing my deep feelings
You still hurt me a lot.

Was it my wrong understanding?
Or where your words misleading?
How can you do that to a heart,
Which was still freely bleeding?

Why don't you recall a few days ago,
Your hurtful words you wrote with your pen.
Was it your bitter-sweet intention,
To introduce me to another pain?

I believed you for a while,
Thinking your eyes would not lie.
I cry when I remember,
The first time I told you "hi"

Your face so beautiful,
It's so hard to forget.
Your walk so graceful,
Beautiful, not offset.

Your heart left me,
Cold and alone.
My heart lays upon debris,
And is not ready to be shown.

You're the one I truly understand.
You're the one I want to be around.
You're my heart, my soul, my everything.
Without you i have to dig my grave underground.

© Copyright 2007 By: Italian Stallion And Goran

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Collaboration with Goran

Goran: http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=171655
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  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow two of my favorite poets together in one.. thats preaty amazing.. and I give you guys a major smile for the fact that you are able to colaberate(sp?) in the first place its a very tricky thing to do. Im not really a big fan of this poem however, I'm not quite sure what it was but it didnt really speak to me and I had a hard time getting into it. Some of the metaphores were amazing though so nice work on that.. I think that it would be much better if you got rid of all of the "your"s in it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Wow the two kings together lol hehehe just kidding but again no words of critisisism hun sorry lol :d

    xxx aexxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    "Your the one I truly understand.
    Your the one I want to be around.
    Your my heart, my soul, my everything."
    [You're] (Because you are trying to say 'you are')

    My, oh my. What can I say about this poem?.. Hmm, well, the two best love poets in my eyes, on this site working together to write a love poem, could this be any better?

    This was such a beautiful, romantic poem. You boys are such a talent, the ladies must love it. Excellent job on this one (aside from the mistakes) Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very nice to the both of you it was wonderful I absolutly loved it best love poem I've read all day my favorite stanza was the second one it had so much meaning to me nice work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Touching. i like the word choice in this poem, the emtion is outstanding. You did an awesome job here 5/5

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