Interesting piece, but it's a little emotionless. It could be deeper, for the feelings that you're describing.
I won't rate, cause I personally dislike this kind of love poetry, but don't take offense... everyone has different opinions.

Interesting piece, but it's a little emotionless. It could be deeper, for the feelings that you're describing.
I won't rate, cause I personally dislike this kind of love poetry, but don't take offense... everyone has different opinions.

Overall a good poem. Good word choice and flow. Improve the following parts

planned to be/planned it to be, would happen or would be for tomorrow.

And work on the ending plse

Tc
Fsams

Awww what a sweet poem i love it alot, you are now definately going into my favourites
xx

Every beat of my hearts
Is unexpectedly....

i really love this ending, i think your poem holds meaning and love well done
xx

I love this poem. it is so nice and full of love. 5/5

Kalee

This is a pretty good poem...the emotions were expressed good...although i think you sometimes used past tense and then present tense which really confused me... there is some improving that needs to be done here.. overall 4/5.

Aww
so sweet
love it
great job

This is an awesome poem, short and simple but ti was beautifully expressed. it was straight to the point and love is great when it creeps up on you mysteriously, 5/5

nikki

A nice show of emotions. The rhymes are rarely seen and the flow is a little weird. again a 4/5

The last two lines were beautiful...
All in all a cute piece that I enjoyed.
Well done *5/5*

That sounds like inmidiat love.... nice poem i like it

"Unexpected feelings so fast
And heart was so powerful"
^I could relate with that so strongly ... well said.

The poem as a whole held meaning and emotion but I think you could add a lot more to it. Beautifully done though *5/5*