This Flesh A Tomb

by dollwithafrown   Apr 30, 2007


I'm trapped in a world where no one knows me
Where I'm isolated and afraid
Nobody calls when those tears envelope my cheeks
Not a single soul comes to my aid

I'd love to be a different person
Someone of whom I don't know
A person who takes pride in who they are
Somebody who knows how to grow

Instead here I am, stuck like a brick
Enclosed in the most solid wall
I have nowhere to go, I can't even move
I'm not even allowed to fall

This delicate skin is scarred so much
That it's beyond recognition
Ripping at the flesh has become my world
So strong, a never-ending addiction

I feel like I'm in a solid box
A tomb right beneath the ground
When alive I'm alone, and in death I'll be too
Unless this dark tomb is found

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    So scary and you really created an image
    Flow keeps you going and the topic was eliminated
    Well done
    Laura

  • 16 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    THis poem had a great flow to it. But it's not as good as your other one "Meet Your Master" but close. Again speechless! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Strong until the ending stanza, I do believe. But, that was not bad anyways.

    I loved the odd syllables and the rhming; the message was strong and beautiful as well.

    The only thing I can complain about is punctuation; I complain about it to everyone, though, so no worries. It just really helps the flow. =]

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    This is a bit different, the feelings aren't... but I don't think I've ever seen someone write it down. You did a great job with it! The flow was a bit shaky here and there, but nothing that messes the poem up. The rhyming was good, along with the feelings given.
    You did a great job with it.
    -Teria.

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