Comments : Friends

  • 14 years ago

    by Greg Beam

    This is very touching. good rhythm and great meaning. i hope u find your long lost friend.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Hmm its really deep emotion and its was great!

  • 14 years ago

    by Nikki

    I liked it!
    good job

  • 14 years ago

    by bleeding limegrenn

    Itss wuzz pritty good keep it up4/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Amanda

    I'm not really sure who this is about, but I like it still

  • 14 years ago

    by TracyM

    I like this one. Its something I think everyone can relate to at least once in their lives. Very good.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lisa

    Haha that's awesome.. You put Nsync into a poem.
    It's kind of sad, but it's actually well put together, I like the way you made it flow, good choice in words.

  • 14 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    That's a sad story...it's hard when you lose a best friend...but you expressed that emotion well in the poem. Great job 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by The Mr Simon

    Hey again

    I can relate to loosing a best friend, you communicated your thoughts clearly, but it was not overwhelming despair. I like it, kinda mild : )

  • 14 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Good meaning! keep it up! good choice of words! I can relate to this one.. because I lost a number of my friends :( anyway TC

  • 14 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    It's not one of my faves from you, but it's fairly decent. The flow is extremely rough, and the rhyme sounds very forced, so try to work on those a little.

  • 14 years ago

    by Vanessa

    That was really sad ,and so touching. I think most people could relate because we have al lost a friend that for awhile we keept in contact, then nothing. I could feel your emtion strong. the flow was grand, and the word choice excellent. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Hm.. I liked it but it didnt really seem like a poem to me some of the rhyming was a little off and the way it was presented made it a little hard to read, if you were to seperate the stanzas I think that it would be a little better. However the message was sweet, add a few more poetic devices in your work and it will be much better.

  • 14 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Awww.. nicee poem.. the rhyme scheme was a little off but that's ok. I still enjoyed it.. and hell yeaa to nsync!.they were the best haha... but anyway great poem.. you have a nice style of writing.. keep it up =]

  • 14 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    This is a very heartfelt poem. I know you said to not comment on the flow, but this one isn't very flowy and kind of hard to read but the message behind it is good. That you miss your friend and you want to hand out. Hopefully you get to see your friend again.

    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

  • 14 years ago

    by BreeAnna

    I can relate to this poem. I know how it feels to lose someone that you once called your best friend. My best friend since 7th grade moved to another city to go to college and she kinda got mixed up in the wrong crown I dont hang out with her that much anymore but we have talked and we know that we will be friends for a life time. I hope you find your friend again. good poem.
    Bree

  • 14 years ago

    by Boy

    It was sweet poem. lovely take care 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Lozbi

    I hate the thought of lost friendships and friends who move away. especially if that one person made ur life so much more liveable. great work, love the flow and all.
    5/5