That was really sad ,and so touching. I think most people could relate because we have al lost a friend that for awhile we keept in contact, then nothing. I could feel your emtion strong. the flow was grand, and the word choice excellent. 5/5
Hm.. I liked it but it didnt really seem like a poem to me some of the rhyming was a little off and the way it was presented made it a little hard to read, if you were to seperate the stanzas I think that it would be a little better. However the message was sweet, add a few more poetic devices in your work and it will be much better.
Awww.. nicee poem.. the rhyme scheme was a little off but that's ok. I still enjoyed it.. and hell yeaa to nsync!.they were the best haha... but anyway great poem.. you have a nice style of writing.. keep it up =]
This is a very heartfelt poem. I know you said to not comment on the flow, but this one isn't very flowy and kind of hard to read but the message behind it is good. That you miss your friend and you want to hand out. Hopefully you get to see your friend again.
I can relate to this poem. I know how it feels to lose someone that you once called your best friend. My best friend since 7th grade moved to another city to go to college and she kinda got mixed up in the wrong crown I dont hang out with her that much anymore but we have talked and we know that we will be friends for a life time. I hope you find your friend again. good poem.