Father

by christina   Apr 30, 2007


Is it true fathers are there
When your born
Are fathers suppose
to be there
When you go to college
or
those little things
like when you lost your
First tooth
Do they love you or hate you?
Do you call them or do they call you?
My father is a screw up
Is yours
Are they all
Or is it just me?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    Change it to Mother and it could be about me
    A very powerful little poem, well done
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by Black Princess

    Interesting, am i wrong to get the impression that you meant, do you call them, or do they call you.. instead of
    "do you call them, or do you call them."

    any way this poem confused me a little the flow was abit shakey still a emotional subject obviously for you as expressed in your poem. 4/5 nice work