Ally's song.

by Hidden Feelings within these Words   May 1, 2007


1st verse.

For the first time, I've been silenced.
Left with nothing to say.
As I look deep into your eyes.
My thoughts seem to run away.

No amount of words could describe,
the feeling I have for you.
I just wish there was someway.
Someway that this I could prove.

Chorus.

You're beautiful, you're wonderful.
Too good to be true.
Amazing, and I'm gazing..
Only at you..

You're beautiful, you're wonderful.
Don't know what I would do..
Amazing, it's unfading..
When I think about you.

2nd verse.

Now every time, I see you,
you take my breath away.
Without you I don't know what I'd do..
Together, I wish we'll stay.

There's one more thing, before I go..
one more thing to speak of.
It's not only cause I think that you're beautiful.
But you're the one that I love.

Chorus.

You're beautiful, you're wonderful.
Too good to be true.
Amazing, and I'm gazing.
Only at you...

You're beautiful, you're wonderful.
Don't know what I would do.
Amazing, it's unfading.
When I think about you..

I'm in love with you.
I'm in love with you.

Actually, I didn't write this.. My boyfriend wrote it for me at Christmas. He asked me to put it on here, hoping for some feedback, thank you for reading. I hope you'll comment and rate it. =)

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  • 15 years ago

    by Star

    That was beautiful! You're so lucky!

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was cute and sweet. You must have a nice bf =) Very talented. It was interesting to read because the emotions were strong. Well done ~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    I loved this. Let him know he's a WONDERFUL song writer. :D So is his gf. Lol.
    It was cute, and sweet. Which, I loved about it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Julienne

    Lovely lovely song... um the first verse, right at the end the rhyming sounds a little forced, but i sang it out loud to my own tune and i love it... its awesome wording throughout the song and i especially loved the chorus, top job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I like that it shows how much emtion your boyfriend has in his heart for you. Good job. 4/5

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