Hidden Love

by Lynn   May 1, 2007


I remember being stranded in that crowded room
but as i look around all i could see was you.
You had such a twinkle in your eyes
My heart just seemed to beat so fast.
I knew i desired your love
I knew i needed to be in your arms,
be the one you called your own.
But you and me were just friends
I had to keep this desired love to myself
I had to imprison my heart
in a steel box and keep my love for you hidden
For how much longer til you realize?
How much longer must my heart break?
When will the trusth finally be revealed?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kurt

    The poem's flow was a bit sketchy due to the lack of a central rhyme scheme. However, the syllable counts weren't far off and allowed a simple beat to be established. The lines seemed to be written with emotion and gave the poem a sentimental feeling. All in all the poem was well written. 5/5.

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