My Feeling (not finished yet)

by Kalee   May 1, 2007


This is my first attempt at a song. It wont be very good as it isn't finished yet.

I can't stop this feeling,
The way I feel for you,
You know I love you,
I know you do.

*chorus*
I shouldn't love you
But I want to,
I shouldn't see you,
But I can't look away

That is all I have for now.

Kalee

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  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    First stanza was okay.
    I guess it felt kind of cliched, though.
    I shouldn't see you
    But I can't look away.
    I love that line :]
    I don't think I should vote.
    I want to read this when you finish.
    And say.
    Ahh.
    This poem deserves a 5 :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Han84

    Gd start hun... u could think of a real cool name for it... good start love 5-5

  • 17 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Im not gonna rate it since its not done yet :) I have a couple songs on here that are still being worked on so I know how it goes. message me whenever u finish it cause I would love to see how it turns out. keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    I thought this was really good.. once you finish it let me know.. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I think that it is great so far. I can't wait to read it again when you finnish it. 5/5

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