I really liked this poem. Alot of emotion. I didnt even realise that it was an acrostic until i read the message at the bottom. Well done. xx Chrissie

Wow that was really good. I could feel the raw emtion strong. I can relate to this. You did an amazing job. I found one to comment on. I am sorry it took me so long to get back to you I haven't been on line in a couple of days.Thanks for all the comments, I like your worl as well.

Wow, really deep, i could feel the sadness and pain in your words. very well written.

Actually that was quite a good acrostic, the word choice to correspond with the first letter of each line appeared smooth and free...rather than restricted and forced.
I'm generally not a fan of rhyme so it's not much of a surprise that I found the rhyme less than perfect in this poem. It seemed predictable and average.
The first line or two didn't make sense, due to the words "these feeling." For it to make sense it should be "these feelings."
Subject wise it was nothing new; pretty overused subject. But you used the acrostic form quite well indeed.
Thanks for sharing.

Beautiful write!......good job!.kp it up!!!

Hidden they were from< I think that doesn't make much sense, maybe something like: Hidden there from.. so on.
Other than that one thing, I loved this poem. It was a great write. Keep it up, hun.

WOW I enjoyed every line in that poem! I like to write in Acrostic form ;) well done! Such a beautiful poem! keep writing ;)

Ohh!!!.....Beautiful wortk...very strong and fab choice of words ...and this peice has a lot of emotions filled in it....Great work!!..Kp writing!i give it a5/5..as always:-)
xxPoojax

Grate poem.the flow was a little harsh but I loved the first letter thing LOL that was cool.