Brightness In The Midst Of Despair

by Fan Angeleo   May 1, 2007


I am dying inside and out.
Don't let me leave you behind.
It really wasn't my time to go,
my desire and passion to live just went out the door.
Everyone wanted to hear me shout,
I must live put up some fight and everything they said
will turn out alright.
Tell me is my pain and suffering not plain to see. I can't go on trusting or caring for everybody.
My heart must be tired after so much defeat, love
have it's ups and downs, but I can't give up there must
be someone whose feeling this truly.
Life has brought me and kept me safely, surely someone out there must love me.

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  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Hey!!.beautiful poem...i just loved it...It's just so powerful..n very well penned!
    Kp it up!
    an easy 5/5 frm me!

    Tk care!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    Gee thanks for the comments. I'll check your poems out and vote.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This poem holds loads of emotion
    Great job

    =-)
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelsea

    I like this poem, its really powerful.
    IDK about the flow, though.
    5/5