OOOOOoooo I liked it 5/5

Thats so sad.. full of emotion.. great job!!!

A rather good poem.. good structure and you clearly state how much she has meant to you... And you end it in a good way since you don't make it a happy ending and you state a good point =)

Good job =)

Love is the greatest emotion, but while it can help us it can also hurt us. a lot of people have been ensnared and beaten down to their knees by a lost love. good poem, and keep writing.

your servant:
david

This is a very good poem marc, i give it a 5/5!!!! keep it up!!!

Excellent poem

Great poem, very sad. Sometimes the true realities of life and a lost love can make you want to go to a place in your mind that refuses these situations...unfortunately, the truth still hits you, the idea is to watch for it coming so you can dodge it. Great read, 5/5. -unattractive1

Marc!excellently penned poem.........love hurts..yeah..but it can make our lives too...greatly written!....kp it up!
A well deserved 5/5!!
xxPoojaxx

Sad heartfelt, and excellently penned. that was amazing. I like this one the best so far. the word choice was strong like the emtion, and the flow was great. no crtisim here. I think this one is perfect 5/5

This poem makes me want to cry because that is exactly how i felt when my ex broke up with me!! I felt like every day was just draggin on and on and it was just never ending pain..you just took the feeling out of my heart and wrote them down with beautiful words! 5/5

I got butterflys just like I CoZ This Pain did! Realy deep Marc

You are truly talented ^_^
I like the repitition of "Ninety days had passed since our great divide" This sentence is just so strong, and you can feel that it's hard for you to go on.. you can feel your emotion in that line... and in the rest from the poem! =) Good job again Marc =]<3
5/5
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A very strong poem.
Very emotional, very sad..
Love can bring lots of happyness, but on the other side, it can hurt like hell..
Hope you will be oke..
You did a great job on this one.
Take care