Hi again,

I'm assuming this is your second recent poem... I hope you don't mind my critique... >_<

I've been so sad lately
Who could I talk to?
I thought i had someone
But all they did was lie

Will i ever find someone
To always be here for me
Or will I always be alone
With no one to hold me

Crying alone in my room
Wishing for someone to talk to
To tell away all my problems
Someone who will listen

I don't know what to do with the last verse, seems fine apart from 'I'll be alone for the rest of my life' which seems about 1 or 2 words too long.

But that's just me. 5 stars for this one because it sets out the imagery in my mind so well, very heartfelt, and I hope i haven't ruined it with my comment...

Nice one. I did see a few things that could be fixed but other then that this is a great poem. 5/5

I felt emotions in this poem, yes.
But to me, they kind of felt exaggerated.
I'm sorry if I hurt your feelings, but this is only my opinion.
It seems cliched, everyone has been
Writing the exact same thing...
Other than that.
It's perfect. Lol.
I mean, I don't like what you write about.
But if I did, there would be nothing
To criticize you on.
You've got great format.
Spelling is, too.
And your words you have chosen are excellent.
I'll give you a 5/5.
Hmmkay?

Okay.
I reread your poem again.
I guess I exaggerated.
You words are simple, not excellent.
Lol.

Aww. It's so sad. There's always going to be someone out there for everyone. It was emotive and rhythmic. I enjoyed reading it. Great work!

I like it, typical however...you should know that life will continue onward and there will always be someone there to fall back on...depressing, yet perhaps the truth of the moment. Nice.

This was a very god poem...so true to the heart...and you could definitly tell it came form your heart. I could feel the emotions you are going through right now cause i am going through the same thing
If you ever need to talk...PM me

nice job
5/5
~shannon~

This is a good poem, sad but good. It seemed to flow nicely as if just spoken and not written. nicely done

The flow is good, well penned. Emtions are strong and clear. All in all I say you have done another excellent job 5/5

I liked it really good

I liked this poem a lot. I can relate it and feel all the emotions as I read. Good job. 5/5

Aw this is so sad! but very beautiful! well penned! Very emotional! I enjoyed this poem! Flow was smooth! good job! another excellent work from you! 5/5!

Very nice poem, I like how you just started your poem with no extra wording in it, and it was very raw and demanding. I like it. I think you could've chosen a better ending for your poem, but other than that, I'd give it a 5/5.

Well written, very sad though i think it touches a little peice in all of us :)

Aww again very easy to read. And write everything you feel accurately how u feel it. It makes your poems so great. Amazing write 5/5

I can relate to this one.
Great poem, with good wording. It's written honestly and emotions are very well expressed.
Well done, 5/5

But I've come to realize,
I'll be alone for the rest of my life,
No one wants to be with me
And I don't even know why.

This stanza brings a twist in the poem and its really nice. You have desperately written this piece with full of grief and nice wordings. Well deserved 5/5