The thoughtful eyes

by Fsams   May 2, 2007


The thoughtful eyes
Bereft of lies
Accepts advise
To be just wise

He treats the good
The way he should
He treats the bad
To make them glad

He loves the black
And so the white
Is on the track
To make things right

He fights for life
A peaceful life
Where every share
A helpful life

What ever the name
He treats the same
He is a friend
For all, till end

-sujjey-fsams 2007-

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jiyaa

    Wow what a friendship poem. I liked it v much. True chums must hav al those qualities.

  • 18 years ago

    by Corruption

    Heya this is a great poem
    tis good
    it has a nice flow
    and nice wording
    it is a real decent poem
    good job

    Keenan

  • 18 years ago

    by Unwitted

    The simple rhyme scheme is great. Illoved reading it.max ratings

  • 18 years ago

    by Joy

    This was a pretty good poem,
    must be someone real special. :)

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