Again Excellent write very deep, but well put, I can almost feel your pain and the thoughts that run through your head , i have felt in my life so I can relate, great job, keep up the good work,,, your friend,Tracy,,, 5/5

I can appreciate the raw emotion reflected in this poem. The joy and sorrow of passion in everyday language

Like Tracy said, very deep and heart felt poem. You are great at getting emotion across to the reader. Once again, flawless rhyming and flow. I love all your poems. 5/5

I've been telling my wife that last part of your awesome poem for so long ,it feels like you read my mind . how can someone i never meant know so much about me, It's a
small world. no doubt. cy 5/5 as always
im your biggest fan