Me & You

by MaSkEdSoUl   May 3, 2007


Harder than cement
Tougher than steal

Better than the first
Yet not like the last

King and Queen
Me and You

Royal And Envied
By all that see

Romeo and Juliet
Is what they think

They talk and blabber
Hate and reject

But all that matters
Is me and you

Our love is Strong
Like no other

I love you
And you love me too!!

**Wasn't my best but thought I'd post it anyways. Please comment and rate. Oh and tell me how to improve it if it needs improvement (which I think it does lol)**

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    I really liked this one. Although it didnt rhyme and there weren't many metaphores the message was pure and sweet. "But all that matters/ is me and you" that was my favorite stanza because its so true in love lots of things can tear two people apart but in the end the only thing that really did that was the people involved because its only their ideas that matter. Nice job. I liked this I can realte to it 100%

  • 16 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Awww thats cute, nice and light :) keep it up
    loved the first two lines, great way to open it