Because of You

by X Kashies Misery X   May 3, 2007


Lost and alone,
No where to run,
No where to hide,
No one to listen to me cry,
Falling to pieces,
Every time,
Until you came along,
Cheered me up,
Made me stronger,
Ready to move on...

Lost,
Frightened,
Sad,
Angry,
Neglected,
Picked at,
Low self esteemed.

Helpless,
Searching,
Always looking,
Furious with rage.

You've helped me,
Controlled me,
Helped me see through the dark times,
Lifted me up,
Made me feel worthy,
Worthy of life...

Lost and alone,
I am no more,
I am a something to myself,
I don't hate myself any longer.

Befriended me,
Even though I was truly complicated,
Searched through me,
You've seen my soul.

You've picked out the dirt,
The stuff I have been hiding for so very long,
To loose you is unthinkable,
Unless you truly wanted me to...

Forget you?
NEVER,
Love you?
POSSIBLE,
But at the end of the day,
No matter where you are,
You always talk to me so gently.

Because of you,
I can now sleep in peace,
I can sleep quietly,
I can rest my weary soul,
Knowing you are with me,
In my mind,
Is my soul,
In my heart,
In my life...

=)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nikki

    Hey...first of all, thanks for commenting on my poems and I've just been checking some of yours out. I love this one, can't believe no-one has commented on it! The story your telling appears so sad yet you build it up into something happy and hopeful.

    The only part I would personally edit is this:
    "You've helped me,
    Controlled me,"

    I think 'controlled' should be changed to 'guided' instead. The person that befriended her seemed to do it out of kindness and love, but to me, 'controlled' is a word that indicates selfishness. I don't know, probably just me lol :)