Comments : Beauty of Life (Palindrome)

  • 16 years ago

    by robin milford

    Excellent poem great job I loved the whole reflex thing cause it totally flowed and madee sence i aint never seen some one do something like that before

  • 16 years ago

    by Perfection

    A good piece of work, you surley do point out what is most beautiful in life and you do it in a very poetic way... The flow and the structure were also good so it is overall a great poem

    good work =)

  • 16 years ago

    by June

    Brilliantly done ,well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    nice poem, the flow a the structure were very good, you did a good job on pointing out whats most beautiful in life =) 5/5
    kisses stephanie

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Before I start: Thanks for the comment. You think you can vote? I'm voting on yours. :)

    I liked how you did this. You gave everything a little twist. And it made sense. Mine would have ended up like this:

    Ice Cream = Cream of Ice

    :)

    You had a wonderful vocabulary it added to the poem a lot.

    Great Style

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by carissalynn

    That was beautiful! I loved these lines, totally me:
    Astonishing and unplanned
    Soothing tunes and rhythm
    I hate planning and i love music lol.
    Great job, write more so i can comment more [[=
    Carissa

  • 16 years ago

    by doug frazier

    Well written wallace, I can tell you spent alot of time in its creation. The poem has a nice flow with good imagery. Great poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Elizabetta

    Very interesting, I have never heard of a palindrome before, but now I know what one is, and I think it was great.

    Great job - 5/5

    ~Lizzie~

  • 16 years ago

    by Yvonne

    This is really beautiful! I enjoyed it alot. Keep writing.

    -Yvonne

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Excellent job on your Palindrome. Word choices were great :)

    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Poeta

    This is really creative! Where did you get such a great idea? Love it!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Hatori

    I have tried to make a palindrome poem before, but I failed miserably. Knowing that, I can honestly say that you did a spectacular job on this poem! I've always admired unique poems, and your choice of words contributed to the elegance of your poem. My favorite line was: Charming yet perilous. It captured so much within such few words.
    Well, great job, and I wouldn't change anything!
    Keep it up, 5/5!

    Hatori
    The Illusionist

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I love this style of poerty and i think you portrayed this style really well. nicely done here. Well done ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    You did one!! Yay
    And you did it amazingly
    I loved the way it all flowed together, it seemed so natural!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by mohamed

    Dear nice poem i had tried writing one like this (palondrom) but .....:(... gud work keep it up.

  • I really love this poem..........great work and can you check out some of my poems and tell me what you think.thankz....and 5/5......

    GREAT POEM!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Nicely done palindrome...perfect to form....good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Rebecca

    Wonderful poem! I love all the lines! 5/5!
    Thanks for commenting on my poem :)

  • 16 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    Wow, I loved this poem. It made me smile so much. 5/5 It's written amazingly. Keep it up! I would love to read more
    Check mine out please

  • 16 years ago

    by Megan Anderson

    I really like it:D