Written On

by carissalynn   May 4, 2007


Confusion surrounds me
Little words puncture my soul
blinded not able to see
of you who are such a fool

You turned me upside-down
The person i hate to be
everybody to look down upon
quiet and sad, written alone

This blue that coats my skin
is the feelings from me
flowing through, unable to hide
shielded within my being

Objects form on top my skin
showing the pain ive held within
no longer caring, for you who think
i sit here alone, my heart in sync

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    I loved it. Written amazingly. You show your feelings well threw penning. 5/5
    Check mine out please

  • 18 years ago

    by the pale queen of the silent night

    Waw..that was powerful, sad and beautiful...
    the word is as though they are alive, its really strong...
    great job...
    enjoyed it very much

  • 18 years ago

    by FallenAngel

    A true piece of art. You sculpt letter and words together to form such sorrowful beauty. I hope to see many more beautiful works of art from you. 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wow.
    Amazing job! :] I'd have to say that the last stanza is my favorite though... ;] The flow was flawless, your word usage was great, & the emotions were strong. Fantastic write, keep it up! 5.5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sasha

    This is a very nice poem you are a very talented writter

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