Go michelle yet again. I love ur work and always will. Good on u. I also needed to tell u that i took the private msg thing off my profile bcoz some ppl kept sending wormms and viruses. ttys, rose

OOOOOMMMMMMGGGGG!!!! THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL!!!! That was really AWESOME!!!! I could not have worded it better myself given all the time in the world. At least not before you ;) I would quote a line or two..but i loved the WHOLE THING!!! I loved every single line in that poem. They were al spot on perfectly how i feel. Like you came in the middle of the night and just cut my head open and took my very thoughts!!!! That was GREAT!!!
But here goes anywaz...'Baby, please dispel all worries, That I will EVER go away I want to finally make you understand, Right here, right now, today.' That i can totally relate with. My baby has already unfortunetly lost many loved ones. And so she is always fearful that she may lose me somehow. And that is exactly wat im thining.... I also know the feelings behide these lines...'If you weren't beside me What kind of life would it be?' Im already starting to wanna quote the whole thing...so ill give one last one...the last line...'After this agony is over, darling We won't ever again be torn apart' This is wat i look forward to the most!!! I cant wait to finally be with my baby so that we may never ever part again! Michelle...i cant say enough how PERFECT this poem is. OOOOOMMMMMGGGGG ITS GOOOOD!!!!! Your boy is much better at this than me. But i just wanted to say that i ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS POEM!!! Ill leave it up to him to do his thing. Besides...i know as well as you do that of all the comments....you look forward to his the most! Could just b me...;) Keep going...GREAT WORK!!!

-Seany

Oh...and one last thing....i would like to dedicte this poem to my baby! Cuz it says exactly how i feel better than ive been able to. Oh well. I love you baby!

-Seany

HEY MICHELLE,
THIS IS A REALLY GREAT POEM AND I ALWAYS LOOK FORWARD TO READING MORE OF YOUR WORK. EVERY TIME I SEE YOUR NAME UNDER A POEM AND KNOW THAT IT WILL BE GREAT. YOUR WORDS IN YOUR POEMS ARE SO AMAZING AND THEY ALMOST TELL A STORY. YOU ARE DEFINATELY MY FAVORITE NOT ONLY BECAUSE YOUR WONDERFUL BUT BECAUSE YOUR POEMS CAN RELATE TO SO MANT OTHER PEOPLE AND THAT IS WHAT IS GREAT ABOUT YOU. I DON'T THINK THAT YOU HAVE A TOUGH TIME COMING UP WITH POEMS BECAUSE THEY ARE REALLY REALLY GOOD. YOU ARE THE ONE WHO KEEPS ME WANTING TO WRITE MORE POETRY EVERY DAY, AND I COMMEND YOU TREMENDOUSLY FOR THAT. SO THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR TAKING THE TIME TO READ AND COMMENT ON MY POEMS AND I AM REALLY LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE OF YOUR WORK SO PLEASE KEEP 'EM COMIN. DON'T FORGET TO NEVER STOP DREAMIN BIG! THANX A BUNCH AND LOVE ALWAYS,
~RACHEL~

Aww..thx Melissa and the rest of you too...and "Casy" you are entitled to your opinion, so thank you for your comment as well.!! :) Michelle

Very nice poem Michelle, don`t listen to people like casy whp probably cant even spell their names right. Please continue your great poems. Love, Tim

the only reason anyone could ever think that you suck is simply because they must not be educated to understand the extent of what your words mean, i think they are powerful and once again, beautiful

Very Very awesome, Michelle! This is reminiscent of my poem "Forever Times Two" I dunno if you've read that one yet or not.... I know you've read a lot of them. Keep on writing!