Comments : Transient {haiku}

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Excellect Haiku! :) this was really amazing.. your word choice is amazing.. To be honest this is one of the best Haiku I have ever read.

    Keep up the good work.
    Uhm I have to ask something in PM :)

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    First confussion then amazment... if i got the right definitions that this is a piece of apology if I'm not correct please pm me and tell me what these words mean... still i like it your last line i had to google... 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Liquid Grace

    This is just so creamy!!!!!! The flow the word usage and the mingling of languages. Great execution. You have an amazing talent.