Darkness

by Sibyl   May 4, 2007


Sitting alone
dying to cry
wishing so hard
that its easy to say goodbye
knowing its not
knowing ill stop
wishing i had the courage
to bleed away my pain
wishing for once that i was insane
turn off the lights
leave me to die
i promise my dear
ill tell you goodbye

-sibyl

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kaitlyn

    Very good, i like it a lot

  • 18 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    :o I forgot to mention, capitalize your eyes. If you wish, check out my new article. It will help you understand why it is important.

  • 18 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Its = it's

    ill = I'll

    (remember, they are both two different words)

    The last line, for sake of the flow, should be:

    "I will say goodbye..."

    Other than that, well done. I enjoyed this, and it was short, bitter, and to the point.

    5/5
    ~Stephen White

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