Rose

by Maisie Martin   May 4, 2007


Pretty Rose,
flower elite,
your smell to me
is oh-so sweet.

Pretty Rose,
I'd like to go near
but to touch
would cause such fear

Pretty Rose
you're in her bouquet,
swept up in her basket,
and carried away.

Pretty Rose,
you bud and grow,
in my eyes
you are aglow

Pretty Rose
why must you hide?
leave and wilt
why must I cry?

Pretty Rose
I'm hurt by your thorns
my heart is ripped
my love is torn
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  • 16 years ago

    by Fiend in the Iron Maiden

    Short and simple, great poem! ^,^ I really liked it 5/5 go you! XD haha

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Just keep up your nice wordings and I am with you....

  • 16 years ago

    by Leon

    Hey nice job! Itz a simply beautiful poem! It gives a clear image of what is going on.......keep it up.....hope to read another one of your poems soon.........

  • 16 years ago

    by KaKaSHi

    Definately ur best work...another 5/5...=D
    the flow is especially nice.....fast and smooth..
    the repition helped enhance it..good work...keep it up...

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Excellent love poem!!...very beautifully penned! it sure shows Emotions!...lovely poem filled wth beauty!...
    5/5!
    xxPoojaxx

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