*Tear* Great Poem

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Beautiful poem....very good write!!.....loved this 1..amazing peice of wrk!soo deep!

Kp writing!
xxPoojaxx

The last part: And now she thinks of dying everyday,
But just doesn't have the courage to go away.

Thats exactly how i feel

Great poem and vrry emotional i luv it:)

Verry beautifully writen, you also are a wonderful writer. Keep it up!

Very good poem.. I think this is full of emotions and it flows really well.. the only thing is its kinda short.. but other then that i think its wonderful. 5/5

I think that many of us are unhappy with the way we look or our lives sometimes but the reality is it's all we'll ever be, so we should just except us for us and others will to. Excellent poem and great emotion and flow 5/5

This is very touching. im sorry if its you who feels this way.
Geo

Every couplet rhymed except the first one, Maybe you should rearrange the sentences to hold the flow?

Other than that, well done.
A poem alot can relate toooooo.

[All she can think about is the good and the bad,
And all the things she never had.]

LOove those lines. <33

good job.x

I love peoms like this that makes me see myself in them ~ Keep up the good work ~ Things do somehow get better ~

Wow, I read that and it reminded me of myself...

"She wants everyone to love for who she is,
Not for what everyone wishes."

^^Exactly how I feel...great job!

Brooke<3

Wow really powerful ending. a dark jem. 5/5 just groovy.

Really really deep, a tear would come down my face, but im no homo,lolzZz

Sooo great!

I liked this poem- I could really see the feeling in it. I felt a little bit like there wasn't a great rythm, bt apparently everyone else likes it so what the heck, lol- great poem. keep writing :)

Very touching xx

Very emotional....full of pain and sadness...but the rhyme made a great flow to it...great write!!

I thought this poem was very well done for what it's length was, your emotions are strong as well as your message and I never had any trouble with it's fluency. Nice work.

A truley great poem indeed.
you did a fantastic job with this piece!
you have talent.
keep up the nice work.
5/5.

Short and strong...great write