Storm coming in

by Vanessa   May 5, 2007


The storm is coming in
Fury from the sin
Beaten once again
It will never end

I stood there
He didn't care
That I was crying
Part of me dying
Shaking in fear
He was so near
I felt his breath
I prayed for death

The storm is coming in
Fury from the sin
Raped once again
It will never end

I hit the floor
Screaming no more
As he drove it in
Filling me with sin
He hit, closed fists
Grabbed my wrists
Thrusting so intense
It made me wince

The storm is coming in
Fury from the sin
Cutting once again
It will never end

I stood in the shower
Almost void of power
Blood in the drain
I'm completely insane
Cuts are deep, and precise
Ah the razor slice
my eyes close, tight
Finally I did it right

The storm is coming in
Fury from the sin
Death, once again
It will never end

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  • 16 years ago

    by Allison

    Wow...this poem was great. I loved the repetition and the flow was great. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

    Alyson

  • 16 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow.. this is really sad.. also i like how you repeat the same stanza with slight changes through the poem.. the flow was really great as well as the word choice and rhyme scheme..

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    A very cool, cold, sad sad poem. But I liked it. Keep it up you are a great writer. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    I really liked the images and the way you portaited everything. the only thing was the second to the last papargraph well it some how moved it off metor but none the less a good write. Good job Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by amber

    Wow. very poewrful. you are so talented. keep it up

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