Comments : All Three

  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Lol nice poem Goran. Short, and to the point. I enjoyed the read. As always it had a great flow and rhyme.

    Peace, Joe

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Lol i liked the last line it was great. This poem was quite cute and quite funny mixed together. Flow was nice. Well done with this~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Oh i loved this poem. it was so full of love too. it was excellent. i enjoyed the ending the most. when your heart replied with all three. it was a great ending to a superb poem.

    5/5 David

  • 16 years ago

    by shela

    I hope I am not one of them, or else? you know it.
    haha
    I feel sorry for those who love you, I guess they do not know you like I do.

    j/k just trying to make it more funny.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mousie

    Lol well that would be a dilemma now wouldn't it? good luck with that one, i'm confident you'll make the right decision, you're strong enough to make it. just listen deep down to what your heart tells you, trust me, somewhere it's whispering only one name, you just have to listen harder. great poem goran, as always, no matter what genre. 5/5 for the greatest poet on earth.

  • 16 years ago

    by Avan Ahmad

    Hmm interesting poem. In all your poems you talk about one girl but now its three. Nice! dast xosh

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    That was good, it actually made me laugh. As always great job. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by AlaSkA

    A three way tie is never fun. i cant do that with multiples, get hemmed up with it. and loose them all. the line, they all love me and same here, could use some work. just doenst sound like your usual word choice. other than that man, good poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Loved this poem....Beautiful ending!...
    Great job!....Excellent poem!..sure 5/5
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    The flow ruined the poem, rather, lack thereof. I liked the poem, and it is obviously well written, but it just didn't hit me as hard as a poem with a flawless flow would have. I tried to think of ways you could fix the flow, but my mind seems to be on writing mode, not in editing mode right now. All the same, still a very well written poem. Good job.

    5/5
    ~Stephen White

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    good poem, it made me smile, 3 girls ah though decision, i think that the flow was okey and the rhyming is good, I loved it 5/5
    kisses stephanie

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonesomeme

    Great job...I think that this poem really was close to home for me because I have recently been battling this same thing in which I care for several different women but I am not sure which is the best chosen for me....5/5 Best wishes

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelsea

    This poem made me smile. It is well written, and it has a great flow. The word choice is nice too. Good jobs
    Kelsea

  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    I dont really like this one that much because the meaning of this poem doesnt really make sense to me

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Lol I like the last line hahaha! I can relate to this poem lol.

    I cannot let go of any of them,
    They all love me and same here.
    But I just have one heart,
    How can they all share?

    I love this stanza! :)

    By the way this poem made me smile! good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Hahaha awesome poem! It's hard to find a quality funny poem, but you have a really humorous one here that is written very well! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Hmm, this was okay. It's not your best piece, though. I'm not really one for funny poetry.

    "My heart is so perplexed
    Between the three girls I love.
    Since all of them are nice,
    Choosing just one is so tough."

    ^ I just thought this stanza seemed a little rough. It just didn't flow well.

    I liked the ending, however!

    Nice try, it's just not your best. :]

  • 15 years ago

    by Bugg

    Lol What a dilemma! Why not go out with all three?!? lol It could be fun, just as long as the three never found out, eh? Very cute and funny. I loved it.