The Truth Behind My Crush

by puregoddess   May 6, 2007


There is a boy
who i like so much
and when we touch
he tells me he loves me
with a sweet tender hug
but the truth behind this boy is
hes just another thug.

this was the first poem i ever wrote when i was 9

im now 14 please comment and tell me if i have talent and read my new poems to see how ive grown as a writter!

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  • 16 years ago

    by puregoddess

    I was kidding about writting it when i was 9. I was 14 and he didnt break my heart i broke his ahah. I just know so many girls who have gone threw the dissapointment boys leave them in.
    so this poem is for all the ladies out there.

  • 17 years ago

    by puregoddess

    Ahha nah i like this guy haha a sort of skool crush nd he liked my best frined ahhaha....haha lol =]

  • 17 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    You were 9 and wrote something like this...what did that guy did to you? lol

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