The whole meaning and the ending was truly beautiful. The last stanza; fantastic!
However, the rest compared to that stanza, could be a bit better I feel.
I don't see how the descriptions of the first stanza, link in with the rest of the poem, it seems a bit "odd."
On the first line of the third stanza, I think you meant "my friends." Also, to keep it in 1st person rather than 2nd, in the fourth stanza, on the third line maybe you should have "my pitiful tries."
Just to be picky...It is gramatically correct to capitalise every "I."
Thanks for sharing.

Sweetest poem ever!!

i love it. ^_^

flowed excellently!

gratz on a job well done.

good luck for the contest!
xxx

This poem was truely beautiful the meaning behind it was nicely portrayed with strong emotions. The flow was great. Well done on a nicely penned poem 5/5~mel

Lovely poem Al..Gret wrk!....Welll portrayed wth very powerful emotions!!.very sweet poem!
Easy 5/5!!

Very beautiful. I really like it. It's...I'm speechless....

I liked this one as well, a lot really. Cute.

The Angel of Secrets

:D Very nice! Few typos and grammar, but hey who's perfect? Well done, I give it a 5 :)

Aww this poem is so sweet! im so glad youv found such a dedicated person in yor life. a great poem. kinda like a dedication. loved it. xx

I love this one.... it is amazing! it flows right and it is worded right and everything about it is great.... 5/5

Great job on your poem. Very sad but with hope at the end. Very heart felt.

One day i let go of myself,
And allowed you to share my life,
You protected me from bad,
Wiping the tears i had cried.

This stanza really touched me.
Take Care Cindy

Wow i really like this poem......great poem..5/5..........check out some of my poems if u would thankz...

I love it!!! its a beautiful poem!! 5/5 x]

Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

It's nice .. it's sweet .. good job :D

Wow.. realy nisely written i loved your poem take care

5/5 beautiful poem. so touching and heartfelt. well done its a well written poem keep writing.

I thought it was great, it had a nice flow and great meaning, so beautiful, 5/5

Awhh I loved it. Loved the emotion that came out of it. Really well written XD.

The poem was off flow but the meaning held the poem together. The description was abit off in some places alot of your ideas seem to have jumped around. I think if you took the time to go over this again you would see where you got off track good try though Plot121

This is so sweet.. well the ending lol.. the beging was a little sad but i'm glad it had a happy ending.. "Being past around you friends" it should be "Being [passed] around you friends" .. also in the last stanza "ill" should be spelled "i'll" sometimes adding an apostraphe doesnt make a difference because people know what you are talking about but in this case.. without it .. its a completely different word.. other than those two tiny mistakes this is an excellent poem.. the emotion was wonderful and the desriptions were vivid.. great job :D