So close

by Optimistcly doubtful   May 6, 2007


*alright come on people i don't put these poems up for my health, i would like feed back. You like it? great tell me why, you hate it Fine, i hate you!!! No I'm just kidding tell me why and lastly rate it...Ive had these poems up for like 3 years and no one has rated or said anything except like 2 people....lets be friends! talk to me ill talk back rate me ill rate back...but do something! Any way thanks for reading ill stop talking i hope you enjoy.

2 years together 1 year apart has it been that long?
conversations start to come so much to catch up on
your friend told me what i thought was a lie
i ask you as i start to cry

a girl you loved with all your heart
not me...one who tore it apart
then i think how close i came
to me and you never being the same

i think as my body starts to torsion
what if she never had the abortion
what if she didn't leave you in the dust
how close it was to not being an "us"

what if she never left you without a bye
and she didn't leave you alone to cry
never calling without a care
out of your life she disappeared

How close i came to never kissing you again
to me and you coming to a sudden end
now I'm glad i didn't lose you
and together we can make it through

holding your hand ill never let go
i love you more than you could ever know
I'm glad now were back together
Babe I'm with you forever

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  • 15 years ago

    by magen

    That is an amazing poem keep writing for people who in joy this kinda of stuff heck outmy poems tell me what yu think!

  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems, when you have the time.

    Best Wishes
    Wallace