Wow this poem paints a image in the head. very detailed. and your point is not lost in the detail it remains clear. keep on writing

Reading this paints a picutre of unfotrunate
lives that are cut short which at times society does not see..its a sad read and to know that
things like this still happens..touching.

Very nicewrite i really like it

This is one of my favorites, really powerfull. 5/5