Now that is what i was talking about all this time, you should never forget your first love no matter how low is your hope, keep going till you reach your destiny.
today, after a long time i feel like your this poem is so complete.

luv u baby

Another great poem:) 5/5
It has a great flow and what it tells is true. Keep up the great work.

I don't know why you can't forget your first love either. I'm still with my first true love, i always plan to be, but i know what you mean. it was a beautiful and truthful poem my best friend, wonderful job, good luck to you always! 5/5

Excellent write Goran, you never cease to amaze me with your writes, they all flow so seemlessly with such good rhyme. Great Job.

Peace, Joe

I really like this poem! I can really relate. I can't forget him :( Anyway, great work!! :P
Xx Chrissie

Nice and simple poem and has a lot truth in it :) Amazing work! And i love the way you write! :) Keep up the amazing work!

Loved the peom its totally true no matter how hard any one tries they can't forget their 1st lvoe it's impossible.

So true, love it. Well done keep it up. : )

I agree with this poem 100%.
I have had my first love and we have been broken up for over a year and I still think of him sometimes.
And I know I could never forget him.

Anyway the poem was good and it flowed well.
Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]

This is awsome! and so true!!! it flowed well. dont ever give up on writing. you awsome! keep it up 5/5

Ohh i absolutely agree......... for me first love never dies no matter how long or hom many century are past.. still first love is hard to forget..great poem!

There's a deep meaning into this.
I like that...
But this could be a lot longer, stronger.
The second stanza seems a bit forced.
But the first is powerful.
Beautiful stanzas you have here, m'dear.
5/5 :P

Out of all the poem thsi is my favorite part, "First love leaves a lock on the heart." Dast xosh Goran! nice I like LOL.

Neither do I. I, nevertheless, presume that we, as humans, tend to cherish the one who first breathed unto us the breath of Love, attaching importance to our 'first' memorable moments with that person. Love is like a habit. I mean, once we get into it, it's difficult for us to let go or change our hearts and minds; although slowly but surely it will die out, there's still 'something' left within like a "lock on the heart." as you would say so. =]

Anyway, enough of my babblings. You did a well done job upon writing such a fine love poem. I applaud your consistency and simplicity throughout! (Additional props for that.) Thank you for sharing. Regards, Debbie

The poem was good for the most part you did well but I think if you made more exsamples your poem would stand out more well just a thought well better luck neck time Plot121...

At first...wen i was abt to read this poem...i though...its short...good..
but after i read it i though....wish it was longer!
amazing flow....really!
the first stanza is the best....
surely a 5.5

"You cannot forget your first nest,
No matter how high you fly."

-Very good. The way in which you portrayed love in the words above speaks excellent imagery and great ability. The rhyme is subtle and runs smooth throughout this piece. Very well done :).

That is very true. The flow was great, the word choice was great, and the emtion was clear. You did an excellent job. 5/5

Wow, i really liked it, its short sweet and to the point. i wish it was longer, so please make a sequal or something to continue on from it

This is so true and sweet, and you really put this wonderful feeling into words, just if i were you i would either add or change it so that it had more of an ending cause it seems to just trail off (almost). it flowed so smooth though, and it was beautiful. 5/5
gabriella