AWW S0O CUTE. i L0VE iT. GREATLY WRiTTEN, HUN. C0MMENT MiNE WHEN YA GET THE CHANCE. THANX MUCH APPRECiATED !

Wow, that's sweet. Like awww. Anyways... Nicely done...

I really liked that poem, short, sweet and to the point. Excellent message, I loved it. 5/5 from me!

That was really deeper than it seemed. I loiked it. the style was a little diffrent.The word choice was great, the flow was wonderful, and the emtion was strong. Great job on a well written poem. there is nothing I could think of that would improve this work. Perfect 5/5

That was a great poem. it was deep. Great job. There was a lot of emotion in it to.
it flowed and rhymed good. anyway keep up the great work. 5/5

Great poem....very cute work!!...short..Very cute...and to the point write!!....and the way u've filled in each line wth emotion is great...kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

This is pretty, i feel that the flow was well planned out and i like the way you put your feelings down in words...your use of words makes me think that you are a deep person with a lot of emotions...you have got to be talented in writting for someone to be able to see that when reading your poetry...5/5