Excellent poem, you really have a talent, the flow was excellent and showed some emotions in the poem. Great job, keep it up.

The flow was great throughout this poem it showed strong emotions and was a really interesting read.Well done with this piece of poetry keep up the good work~mel

I like this idea... The taking apart makes the poem stronger in a way.. The ending stanza was good and the two last lines were a great ending in my opinion...

Overall great work =D

How cute :) I like the emotions running in this poem. flow was smooth! Good job! keep it up! ;)