Excellent poem,I'm sorry I know that must be very hard to deal with ,but you did a great job on this write, I'm very proud of you for writing this , takes a lot of courage and I know that you are a very strong woman,thanks for sharing with me, your friend Tracy 5/5

Wow is like the only word to describe this. I feel this is a wonderful, and extremely sad poem. It was perfect, 5/5 not forced at all. It may be long but its held my attention through it all.Plus you took on the challenge of having every other line rhyme not just 2 a stanza. very good

Wow..
This is horrible...
I hope this didn't really happen.
If so, I am so sorry.
No one deserves that.
I really liked it.
It didn't need great vocabulary or intresting metaphors.
It just needed to be told.
Nice job!

I thought that it was sad and great at the sametime. It was a very powerful peace and I hope that others get the message. 5/5

I love the story it really capture my mind while reading this. all the lines the words, the message are truly deeply touch my heart. that poem was so impressive and i was clearly understand. this is my first time to read about explicit poem hmmm it was really enjoyed honestly! by the way,, im just curious! is this really happened, coz it was sad..too hard to recover for me and to forget it..well,,, great job5/5

For the most part it read like a story a very powerful one but a story. The rythming sheme was abit off but the flow was good and the message carried the poem very well good job Plot121

As always another great piece of work. All of your poems I can really relate to.. This was a sad message but told very well.. I know it's hard to go through this crap, I've been through it myself.. I was already teary-eyed when I started reading this because it does bring back memories... But this just made me fully cry...

"
Trying to pull myself together, holding it all in
Doing my best to clear images of recent past
As they filled my soul with their eternal sins
Praying this memory was one that wouldn't last

After the hour, I spent wandering the street
My body grew tired, as my mind grew weak
I looked down in disbelief, barley on my feet
Eyes filling with tears, that ran down my check"

You have a way with words, and it keeps the attention of your readers, keep writing and posting. Thank you for sharing. =) 5/5 of course.
~Ally~

Wow! amazing poem!! captivated me right from the start, i understand the pain you feel as i felt it before, it's the hardest pain to let go off.. its been almost a year for me and i still can't seem to let it go.. thanks for the feedback on my poem, i appreciate it...
stay strong
-sda-

Great job, this was a great write, visual, sadening, and a little frightening, very good job, i enjoyed the details that made it like a story, a scary story...Best Wishes, -Unattractive1

PS. I am going to add you to my favorites.

Wow.,..that was long..but i was soo into it that it felt like i was drifted away somewhere else when i read it...i absolutely loved the ending of it..it was really good and wrapped the whole poem up..i also liked the format of ur poema nd how it all seemed soo real that i could feel it..it certainly made me realize what consequences rape really has, keep up the awesome poems

Amazing, left me speachless.. Such a terrible story but written so beautifully. Thank you for having the strength to tell us your story and expressing how you feel. It isn't something so easy to talk about and most never will so well done. Amazing poem coming from some amazing talent keep it up well done!!

This poem is simply mind blowing! Extremely sad but.. wonderfully writtten. I am truely sorry if this did happen. I felt as if I were standing right there when it did... sadly .. I was molested at nine.. and this .. well you discribed the horror .. perfectly. Your rhyming was amazing. Nothing was forced. Your flow was magnificent! Emotion.. mind-blowing. EXCELLENT. This part hit me the most:

Trying to pull myself together, holding it all in
Doing my best to clear images of recent past
As they filled my soul with their eternal sins
Praying this memory was one that wouldn't last

I can relate

5/5 you deserve no less!

Great job i loved it you are a very good writer and can go really far with some of your poems 5/5 love linda

Very Very sad.
I hope it's not based off something that actually happened to you. But sadly in a way I can relate to it. It was very strong, the words you used and the way you described everything I could picture it all happening like a story in my head.
You did a really good job with this one though.
5/5 For sure.
-Lisa.

Long, but well worth the read. Your talent seems to be in writing stories in poem form. Definitely satisfies the readers imagination-- in a very dark way, of course.

This poem is breath taking. i got tears in my eyes. its a great poem but it is a little lenghtly. but most great poems are a little lenghtly, it was amazing! 5/5

This was the best poem I have ever read in my life. You described this as it really happened...and if it did I am very sorry. This poem explains why so many girls and even women are scared to leave their own houses. Vanessa, gurl keep on doin what you do best. I LUUUUUUUUVVVVVVVVVVV this poem!!!!! I gave you an excellent score!!!! :P

Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

That was truly the best poem i have read thas about life Bravo i give u a 5 keep yo head up

Oh. Nicely said.
Cliche are rape poems, but the way you describe and made me feel sorry for you is splendid.

The story you told was pretty sad, as well. I really hope you didn't experenience this.
Anyways.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5