"I could write a thousand songs,
Each one sealed with a kiss,
Each one a treasured memory,
About the times that i now miss."

i loved that stanza ^_^
your poems are so Amazing =]

~*~Jen~*~

Aww what a very sad poem, but I loved the words you used to express yourself. I know the feeling as you know already from my poems how much it hurts to miss someone. And you said it so right! 5/5 on another sad but beautiful poem!!

I do care : (

I absolutely love this poem especially the last stanza it is a great pice of work and you are a fabulous writer i absolutely loved it 5/5. also thanx so much 4 commenting on my poem means a lot.

I loved this. I wish I could express my feelings as well as you do. Amazing poem.

Thank you for your comment, I really appreciate it. :)

I noticed the comment m'dear...
Maybe you should look into it. But don't go to far, i don't want her to hurt you again.
If she cares she'd either let you in or leave you be.
My opinion anyway.
As for the poem, a heartbreakingly beautiful piece as always sweets..
Crying an ocean is something we all need to do at times.
5/5
*gem*

Aw can imagine your pain!
One day at a time - at times it feels like itll never stop. Justr got to push on. This is an excellent piece, can feel your torment! Take care.

Kelly
xx