This poem is really good...i really like it!!!

"my heart will never mend,
my feelings will not fix,
I'm stuck in that u-bend...
where life holds all the sh*t."
this stanza is me :( while reading your poem my memories played over and over again, this is how i felt too :( its well written and i know many people will relate :)) 99/5

I love this poem...please keep writing

This is the line that stays in my head:

'Two girls hanging on,
One heading for a fall.'

Very clever!

I know how ya feel my bf was with me and my best friend at the same time...Both of them lied to me =[ great poem

Excellet release of your emotions 5/5 :)