First Kisses in The Rain.

by Isabelle   May 8, 2007


I want to look into your beautiful face,
just to say I love you.
I want to be yours forever.

I want my first kiss in the rain with you,
to see the tears on our faces combine with the rain,
to feel water dripping from your hair unto my fingers,
just to know that our hearts melt together.

That'd be a wonderland,
all in it's own place,
deep inside my mind.

I miss your touch so bad,
it drives me crazy some nights,
just remembering the days when you first said you loved me.

I will never forget my promise to you,
as long as my first kiss with you.

I promised you my love forever,
I told you I'd burn my red candle for our love,
I'd give you the earth and the stars combined.

I want our first kisses in the rain,
to feel our hearts beat in sync with the core of the Earth.

I can see it now,
my hair lightly blown by the wind,
and the smile on your face being ever-lasting.

The desire that made us join together,
is like a giant fire,
burning away all other thoughts when Iwe're around each other.

I promise you my love,
if I kiss you in the rain,
it'll be like being reborn again.

I love you,
so you know I'll be with you,
until the time.

This desire is amazing,
so just kiss me.

Kiss me,
Kiss me in the Rain!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Remmi

    W-o-w. That is...wow. Amazing. You are SUCH a good poem writer! OME!! ^_^

    Remmi

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is beautiful..very romantic.
    At times I found it to be quite bittersweet, while at others very adorable, although I'm not sure if that's what you were aiming for when you wrote this...
    Flow in this is better than the others I have read, although I think it could be even better without the fillers.
    Beautiful work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    It was romanting and eep feelings of love. i loved you this way 5/5 take care

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Excellent poem!...very cute!..filled with passion..lovely write!
    Kp up the good job!
    5/5
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Elizabetta

    Another beautiful poem, Isabelle. Great job~

    ~Lizzie~