Deep cuts bring death (acrostic)

by Vanessa   May 8, 2007


Dangerously pressed against my skin
Ending my eternal misery
Evading the dark demons within
Pain setting them free

Chaotic thoughts, corrupted mind
Untie the ribbons of my soul
Thinking of a simpler time
Secrets that you do not know

Broken, battered, bloody heart
Realizing that its not a dream
I watched everything fall apart
Never waking from my scream
Giving up, for I lost my way

Death, the only way out
Ending it all, I have nothing to say
Anger, hate, fear and doubt
That is all I have left
Happy that deep cuts bring death

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow this was so sad yet it didnt seem forced at all like most acrostic poems do. I'm not usually a huge fan of cutting poems but some of the words that you used were very powerful and I loved them. I hope that you dont cut yourself and if you do then I hope that you get better soon, take care, and take care of yourself.

  • 16 years ago

    by isabel

    A very deep poem and very well written...
    i can sadly relate to it...
    5/5
    *isabel*

  • 16 years ago

    by Cierra

    That is sooo good but very scary and still good mmm has this ever happend to you????

  • 16 years ago

    by NeSSiiE

    I like this poem. i could really relate to wut you said...its really good..i admire ur writin...

  • 16 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Wow. Now this is a nice change. You took a cliche topic and made it not so cliche. It still is a little bit, but it's very good.

    Also, I admire this poem because I can't write a good Acrostic to save my life. You did it flawlessly, and with rhyming. Nicely done. =]

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

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