I admire this poem and in every line u can see the truth, today it is happening in everyones life...so everyone can relate to it, the rhyming was great, it all came together..
great job,,
i really like ur poems they are so realistic...

Every line is full of magic and truth! 5/5

This poem is really good : )
... i think everyone gets the message
keep writing : )
<3 jess

There is so much truth in this poem, that it's amazing. You worded everything so intricately that I might even add this poem to my favorites. Great flow, by the way!
The best stanza (I think at least) was:

a whole past left behind
in a cruel twist of swords
tearing values
into twisted words

Keep it up, and I award a 5/5 :D

With all due respect,
Hatori
The Illusionist

"what happened to playing in the fields, chasing butterflies and getting lost in trees"

its sad when ppl actually stop and realize what is actually going on huh?
great write
-laura-

This is amazing. its sad, but also true. its seems like your mad, but feeling blue. you are awsome at righting. i hope you keep writing. it seems like you are letting out a lot of emotions. check out my poems if youd like.

Its sad to imagine but its the truth. Its good to know that you are able to express the chaos in words. Liked it very much. 5/5

Poems like these I think could go on forever! There's just so much chaos that you prolly would run out of things to rhyme or lines to write before running out of things so wrong in the world. A line that I really liked would be:

"A year when the only things one had to fear,
was fear himself."

Excellent line. Excellent poem.

Alesia <3