Self Critique

by Soft Parade   May 9, 2007


Start, but don't finish,
Watch it diminish.

Look to change,
But believe its out of range.

No conviction,
Full of contradiction.

Analise a lot,
But still lose the plot.

Been blinded by love,
Dreamed of flying above.

Want things to easy,
When drunk become sleazy.

Intoxicate in excess,
Trying to impress.

I have a lot of choices,
But listen to the wrong voices.

by Barry Mac Court 2007

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  • 16 years ago

    by Woe

    Ive never read a poem like this one, people usually wouldnt pick this subject....
    I LOVE IT.

    oh btw, you should add gorgeous to the list on your profile ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by Alma

    Wow!
    I loved this poem
    it's true in life we have different advice from everyone but we tend to never listen and continue to think we know whats best.
    beautiful poem!

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