Awesome job5/5

This is such an erotic and exciting poem yet remains tender and written with love. You are very talented.

Very nice piece. loved the way it was erotic, but not in ur face erotic, it told a really nice story and it flowed really well.
excellent

Gary.

5/5

Nicely done - "steamy"

Wow. very nicely written. excellent use of words :)

Ally. x

Over 900 visits to this poem.Wow!!
So erotic. It takes talent to write like that.
The imagery is so vivid. Nice work? What's next?

This poem is great. very sexual and quite intense lol. xx

Nice usage of words and imagery, it flows very well.
Your very talented at your art, cant wait to read more.5/5

WoW...This is really good. The use of words are wonderful...5/5...xoxo

That was great loved it, well written and very romantic and sensual...keep it up

Teasing opening lines that slowly build to a very explosive climax. The steam is coming out of my ears as I write lol. Wow!

WOW .............Xp

Steamy isn't the word, WOW!!!!
When are we going to see some new poems, it's been far far too long!

It's erotic but very sensational. Such a heart wrenching piece, 5/5. Em x

An amazing write.... Nicely written... with talent :) and passion! Well done.