Votes and comments welcomed.

Wow, this was relee moving wallace, i pictured every word, and this really brings you back to earth. [[= just wonderful cant wait for more.
Carissa E>

Wow this was beautiful very well written

What a beautiful and very touching write ,well done on such a great job.

Wallace
Great story put to verse. Kept my attention from start to finish. Keep it up!
Take Care Cindy

Wallace!!.......really touching storyish poem!!....excellent work!!...very beautifully penned!kp up de good work!
xxPoojaxx

Beautiful poem! I like it flow was smooth! A very powerful poem! well done.

Very touching, on the first line I think you meant to say 'turning' not 'tuning', but if you did, then nevermind lol. Anyways excellent work, keep writing!!

Your poem is very nice. The flow is perfect n its so sweet. great piece. God bless u n ur work.

This poem was so sad.
excellent and superb poem
love the way you have written it.
the imagery was perfect and the flow was over well written.
best wishes
and take care
emmeline

I can kinda relate to this, I was born on my grandpa's birthday and then two weeks later he died of heart failure. I was only six. So yea I kinda know how this feels.

Excellent! 5/5

I really liked this piece; it had a heartwarming story to it. I really liked the stanza -

`The sky had tuned cold
On a late Monday morning
It was the time of a funeral
And everyone was mourning`

Such a sad story yet it makes me smile knowing that he could see his grandpa one last time. I'm almost in tears; lol.

Such a great poem; deserves a 5/5

Aww. this was so sad. didnt quite bring me to tears, but i came close, my friend.
This was really well written and worded and the imagery was portrayed perfectly.
love Tara-Kay

Oh wow now this is a sad poem....its so so so sad...and emotional..=[ but i enjoyed reading it....there was some imagery in this one... excellent job... how could i give you anything less than a 5 on this...definately 5/5 from me =]

I loved this piece the best I have read from you yet the wording was fabulous it seamed to real.

This could be in the category poems about life. Message is good and this piece is original. It reminds me on some kind of story. You expressed emotions greatly.

I like this one very much, it is excellently written, so touching. You can pass the emotions to the reader excellently.
The ending is great, very effective.

To me this was more of a story then a pem with a rhyme but it was till good none the less. Again I liked it but I like your other poetry alot better for some reason. Still deseving of a 5/5 in my eyes as it was heartfelt and structured nicely. Keep writing. ~Mel

"His eyes was filled with tears" =his eyes were filled with tears.

I really enjoyed this, it was so saddening and yet so elegantly written.

The depth and emotion portrayed in this were beautifully done, flow was good throughout and the imagery created vivid pictures.

Beautiful ending, I found it to be both saddening and yet at the same time filled with such hope.