Nice...it's like you have a lot of happyness in you. 5/5
---Sophia

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nice outlook on life very postive i would give it a 4/5 tho based on the word choices but other then that i enjoyed it thanks for sharing.

This one is ok
I like that line "I believe in achieving the unexpected" cause it's deep.....I like deep

Not bad, I like it I like your some what view on life it's true

Well i really like this poem...very inspiring.. actually i love it 5/5

~very true... i like this poem very deep and honest, i like it when people try to send messages to their readers.....keep writing....your good at it!!=)~
~Wendy~

Beautiful poem dear...u've penned a great message through this 1..kp up the good work!
xxPoojaxx

This is so true
keep writing

and thanks for the comment on mine, i appreciate it.

I DIDN'T REALLY LIKE DIS ONE
BUT IT WAS OKAI I MEAN U COULD DO ALOT OF BEEN IN MY OPOPIN JUST TELLING THE TRUTH AS I WOULD SAY " BEING REAL " AND NOW ......NO DISRESPECT JUST WHAT I FEEL

Very insightful. However, I DO have one argument; You CAN truly love another and utterly hate yourself; it's happened to me ^_^

I like what message your trying to send but, you've got to remember that most of us were hurt from loving someone and hate ourselves for it and don't love again because of the fear of getting hurt again.

Wow... that was very good. I totally belive in the God part... He is a very big part of my life! Keep up the awsome work...how long have you been writing?

Very true poem...and written beautifuly 5/5

Wow, it's amazing how all of the things you said in this poem are so true. I hate people who judge you by your appearence. nice job 5/5
rose <@>

This is a really great poem, and....so true! A book shouldn't be judged by its cover i believe in that, gave it a 5/5 hope thats ok :-)
Bree x

I like this one! very nice poem!! thanks for the comment! 5/5 for me! =]

I agree to this very much so. I told the same to my friend who didn't believe me. At least I know someone understands.

I think this poem is very positive and it kinda puts you in a positive way of thinking... I like this poem, and it really does make sense...keep on writing...5/5

Only 14 years old, and you're like a professional, keep like this you will go far

THere is a lot of truth in this poem! Good work!