I Need You

by Brittany C   May 9, 2007


Hold me now
don't let go.
Can't you see
I need you so.

I may be strong
or seem to be,
but sometimes I
need to be held tight.

Maybe I can live
without true friends.
But sometimes I just
need to feel loved.

So hold me tight.
Through cold nights,
because I need you,
to say every things all right.

Yes, I need you all right
but don't let that get to your head.
Just be there for me because,
I someone to love just like you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    This was a really cool poem - the rhyme scheme (and partial lack of it) was very original, and you said things simply, yet very poetically. beautiful writing! 5/5!
    ~Claire

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I have to give you a 5/5 for this one, it was awesome, how anyone can downvite such a talented writer is quite beyond me.
    Well done
    love Tara-Kay
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    The layout of htis pom was strange. It grew as it went on showing that you went into more detail near the ned. I really liked this idea. Nice write hun.

    xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    I liked this one to. you started of rhyming but than after the first stanza there was nothing that rhymed. i gave you a 4/5 it was so sweet and the part where you said dont let it get to your head. it was funny (but it always gets to people's heads). it was great accept for a few grammer problems

  • 16 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    I like that poem. I can kinda relate. 5/5

    RavEy!

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