Comments : I Am

  • 12 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Beautiful description of self. The word choice was amazing, and vividly descriptive. The emtions are strong and clear. I love this poem and it structure. The flow is flawless, keep writting, 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This my dear...is perfect.
    The emotion and pain scream through the words in this, really tugging at the reader's heart.
    Flow was good throughout the poem, and you created a beautiful description of all the roles you play.
    Beautiful work.

  • 12 years ago

    by Sourav

    Nice way to express the feelings... The i liked the style of the writing.

  • 12 years ago

    by Marius Laun

    It was a nice piece of work. It like it. It was just sort of interesting becuase That is how a lot of people really are, they are more than just one thing. Keep up the good work

  • 12 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Well I really don't like repetitions sorry. I think it was a good poem.. Just a suggestion to put it in stanzas =)

  • 12 years ago

    by tears i cry

    Thats not all true though because you can change being suicidal i did otherwise great work 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Excellent poem. I think this is the best poem you've written. It's very unique, your word choice was excellent and your descriptions were so vivid and deep. I could relate to a bit of this as well.

    Keep it up && Take Care! 5/5

    -Shannon <3