Sorrow Is A Black Hole

by Hannah Emellia   May 11, 2007


They say that sorrow is a black hole,
That it just keeps on growing,
And sucks in everyone and everything,
Then the sorrow keeps on flowing.

Sorrow is a deadly seed,
That grows into an ugly plant,
When that sorrow turns to despair,
You'll want out but you just can't.

The ones who don't fall into this trap,
Run very far away,
So there's no one to pull you out,
And there you'll have to stay.

There are many names for sorrow,
But my favorite is remorse,
There's no way around it,
So just let it take it's course.

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  • 16 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    I like it. its vry catchy <333

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Interesting poem, it is unique and topic is great. I like atmosphere that you create, you described emotions in this poem excellent.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    So dark, so beautiful. The way you described sorrow is so wonderful, it scares me! I love it! Keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    Very nicely written. Great job!!!

    Josie

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    The words you used were so new and fresh. added spice to this poem. it was so dark and mysterious.

    well done and great discription. 5/5 David

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