You sure have a way with words cy

I agree you do have a way with words ,and itws a beautiful way ,this was beautifully done.

Wow i luv this poem..very good..in my oppion i think u should of extended it a lil....and add more but hey just me rite? i could relate to it which made it a whole lot better so a 5/5

Your poets heart unfurls itself willingly and lends its words to us to float and drift among our own words. Good work, I enjoyed your poem and look forward to more.

This is beautiful and i feel like i can really connect it to my life, i got goosebumps when i read it
wonderful job my friend

I really like this one, its so true.....

I love the message of this piece. What a wonderful ending and how true!

I don't care for the repetition in the first two stanzas and the over use of filler words. Considering, I still like the poem.