I miss you

by moonlil   May 12, 2007


You were too young to die
It was not fair to go without a goodbye

You closed your eyes and passed away
two days before your birthday

I prayed for you each day and night
I wanted you to be strong and fight

But your strength faded away
so that you couldn't stay

Now you are in heaven above
and I am still in love

Everytime I think of your loving words
my eyes fill with tears and my heart hurts

I want to feel your warm embrace
and see once more your lovely face

I miss you so much day in and day out
that i am starting to see you in the crowd

Without you I am going insane
your loss causes me so much pain

I wonder when we will meet
so that my heart stops to bleed

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem, very sad heart breaker ,great job keep up the good work,~~5/5 your friend Tracy

  • 16 years ago

    by Lithium

    Such a beautiful deep poem, i nearly cried, i can't imagine how hard something like this must be like, my deepest sympathies, and great poem, it really expresses each and every line. well done xox lithium

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "You were too young to die
    It was not fair to go without a goodbye "

    The first couplet is something i can relate to... it's a painful thing.
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Greta Miller

    That was a wonderful poem. I can really relate to it.
    good job!

    check out mine if you ever get a chance

  • 17 years ago

    by James

    Hi natalia how are you? i hope your really well.... this is a very sad poem indeed i wish you didnt feel that sad i hate to think of it its really awfull... talk soon take care.. its really well written by the way your so good

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