I also found the meaning to be great in this poem, The flow was a little off but overall it really didnt bring the poem down at all. I found how you started each stanza with the same line made it really capturing because the repetion was strong. Well done on this~mel

Really good, I'm christian so I liked this one.

5/5

~*Alex*~

For being a religious poem it is well done. Being a servant to God and people was the most driving message here. The christians would be profoundly delighted good job. Plot121

Sweetheart , you don't need a comment on this one, it is a prayer! the only bad prayers are the neglected ones.