Your my first and only love!!!

by Ashli   May 14, 2007


Your my first love,
I think about you,
day and night,
your always in my sight,
your there for me,
when no one else is around,
our love goes round and round,
you have opened my eyes to a whole new world,
and shown my heart to a whole new meaning,
of the word love,
and you have made me into the person I am today,
you are my first and only love.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Aww simple and cute! Flow was good and message was easy to understand :) And im sure it meens more to you than ever can for readers! Keep up the good work!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nicole

    Aww. cute poem. ;) keep it up! :)
    You take good care. and god bless you always.

  • 16 years ago

    by Chrissie

    Aww thats so cute ^_^ I can tell this poem was written from your heart. Very well done! Xx Chrissie

  • 16 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    This was good. Its a bit short but you got your point across.
    Your flow and Rhyme were good although the flow was off in some places.. i will give this a 5/5 because everyones first poems are the best.

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